ok so we had to a comment thing in class today with a presenter. apparently I’m supposed to be writing about what a helpful comment is and then three things i could have changed about my write up that we commented on. i think a helpful comment is one that brings to light some of the ow sides of whatever-it-is-your-commenting-on while not being to rude. i also think a good comment is one that brings to light some of the high points while not being tooooo sugar coat-y. as for things i could have done better, i think that it probably wouldn’t have hurt to try and lay it out a bit clearer and at least trying to make the spelling somewhat legible. according to some of the comments I got, there were some points that were a bit broad and could have done with some refinement and such.
so let me check here:
make it more clear
make the writing legible
refine some of the broader points
that covers the three things. i guess im done here.